10-01 歌舞伎

Q.　歌舞伎の起源、特徴について説明しなさい。

キーワード 

 総合演劇様式　integrated theatrical form    阿国歌舞伎　Okuni kabuki

女形　male actor who specializes in female roles

生徒さんの解答

Kabuki is an integrated theatrical form and it origined Okuni kabuki. It was performed by men and woman but now it's performed by only men. The male actor who specializes in female roles in called 'oyama'.

私のコメント

origin は名詞です、動詞はoriginate です。Kabuki is a traditional integrated theatrical form and it originated from Okuni kabuki.

過去と現在の違いを出すには　used to を使うといいでしょう。woman は複数形にする必要があります。
　It was performed by both men and women but now it's performed by only men.