10-02 花道・回り舞台

Ｑ．花道と回り舞台について説明しなさい

キーワード　　

舞台の延長　extension of the stage  

回り舞台　revolving stage　

生徒さんの解答

There are some characteristic things in kabuki. One of them is a "hanamichi" or an extension of the stage which is a raising platform stage extending from the main stage through the audience. It can make the actors closer to the audience. Another is a "mawari-butai", or a revolving stage. It helps change the stage quickly.

私のコメント

things より　equipments くらいの方がいいのではないでしょうか。

an extension of the stage があれば　which is a raising platform stage extending from the main stage は必要ないと思います。
an extension of the stage through the audience か　a rasing platfrom extending from the main stage through the audience.かどちらか一方で十分です。

２つのものを説明する時、片方が　one であればもう一方は　the other です。another は３つ以上のものの他のもののうちの1つをさす時に使います。